In my introduction I gave decent background context as to what exactly I was going to be discussing later in my paper. However, there were a few things which I needed to add more detail to, which will give the reader more understanding of what my point is. Additionally, my peers felt that I did a good job at integrating the scholarly works into my paper, but they felt that I was repetitive and should use more of evidence from the literacy narratives to give different examples and strengthen my argument.

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